Choke to death

by Cara   Sep 20, 2004


You know what life my not be fair but u didn't have to act like you didn't care You could of been there when i needed you the most but i guess that i wasn't very important to you after all your not here now are you we have drifted far apart
i guess were never going to be friends again you may think I'm selfish well maybe I'm i just don't want any one else to die or walk out of my life its like someone put a rope around my neck and pushed me off a deck so i would choke to death some things wont be the same without you but hey i guess I'm ready for a big change
I have friends that wont think twice about saving my life so as i put a rope around my neck who do you think will save me will i be able to take another breath or will i have to choke to death???

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jennifer Fox or Jackson

    whether you think so or not I would save your life and even if it cost me mine saving you then the h*ll with it I would do it anyways...You say I don't care but I do very much so...I will tell you I love you alot and I still want to be your friend but you keep pushing farther and farther away saying you don't think I care and you don't think I want to be there...So if you think that is the person I am then I will be that person!

  • 19 years ago

    by Broken

    oh my goosh...i really felt a lot of pain and anger....but i seriously know how you feel...i think there will be alot of people that can relate to this poem...great job! you should definatly keep up the good work

  • 19 years ago

    by Samantha Mae

    Hey Chick,
    i would so save your life in a heartbeat.....i knew you were a tiny bit upset about you and Jen fighting and dont say that you arent i know you.....anyways dont fell that its your fault cuz its not but good poem chicka and im glad you liked my new one lol well g2g so ill talk to you later Luv ya!
    Sam

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