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by Ashley Washer   Sep 20, 2004


~this one doesn't have to best rhymes~

Last night I finally was about to take the plunge,
I even had the gun.
I closed my door,
and the note I wrote.
I had thought of everything no one was gonna be home.
But then it happened,
what I never expected.
My best friend,
was standing there not knowing it was my end.
She ran over to me and grabbed my hand.
I told her to let me go, I had to take the pain away.
"Let me help you" she said, but it was to late my mind was already made.
I told her if she was my friend,
she'll let my pain end.
She started to show me the scars.
"You helped me so long ago,
so please let me so the same and don't let go."
I lowered my gun,
and knew my new life had just begun.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    Even though it doesn't rthyme it's still "Awesome" :p...hehe...keep it up!!!
    *5*...

    **xoxoxSedushaxoxox**

  • 19 years ago

    by The Secret Keeper

    ash,
    i love that poem. it's great.