I agree with Meena :) It was beautifully written and its the truth! Im glad to have read this Robert. I truly like it! Thank you for the comment on my poem by the way. Keep writing hun!

-Jess xxxx

Not bad! Um, been offline a couple days. Did I give you a subject? Or is it my turn?

*~*Hey there Robert*~*
I really liked the poem...I enjoyed it:)
Good inspirtation;)...Keep on with the writing..
If you have anytime check out mine;)
Chau..

**xxxxSedushaxxxx**

I'm not religious, but I defiantly feel the beautify and power in the poem.

hey, really good. I like it. 5/5

~no more

short but simple. I guessed as soon as I read the bars of colors that it was a rainbow but then you said. Another good poem. good work, keep it up. I will read more later if i get a chance,

Great poem! 5.0 ♥ keep it up! You are very talented!

good poem. 5/5