wow, that was good! ecspecially the last stanza! great work!

good imagary but abit choppy but a good read thanx for the response will look at your others ok

Hey this is a really great poem. I would read more, but I just read this one for now because its late here and you mentioned it in the note to me. I will read more tomorrow when I am not so tired. Take Care! Nice writting! I will be adding more tomorrow! ~Sunshine~

aww i like it, im the one you said you like my poem and wanted me to read yours, yeah i can relate to this one, your very good and i think you should keep on writing too!!!!!!
Tracy

A Great Poem! lol

Awesome gurl!!

See noe i like that poem i can relate keep it up

Thank you so much for coming to see this poem...I really appreciate it...Thanx again:)
God Bless...

~Love Sedusha~

hey sedusha. u commented on one of my poems and told me to read this one. its very beautiful. it feels like something that came out of my own heart. great job!

great poem!! keep it up!! thanks for the comment!! :)

aawww that's SO ADORABLE!!!! and my gosh i can relate to that SO WELL. it's not even funny. NICE!!! you're an incredible poet! gosh i'm so jealous. haha - nikky -

beautiful poem, i really enjoyed this, take care, and I promise to read more soon.

thats a great poem, i really liked it.
keep up the good work.
this poem has made me relise something i should have done ages ago.
thakyou.

Very nice poem, enjoyed it a lot. Keep up the good work!

Very nice, good job!!!

Thas a Nice one Sedusha *5* on this one, Keep writing and have a great day. Adios and Cheers
Shezy