Comments : ♥Heart of Mine♥

  • 19 years ago

    by Liam

    wow, that was good! ecspecially the last stanza! great work!

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    good imagary but abit choppy but a good read thanx for the response will look at your others ok

  • 19 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Hey this is a really great poem. I would read more, but I just read this one for now because its late here and you mentioned it in the note to me. I will read more tomorrow when I am not so tired. Take Care! Nice writting! I will be adding more tomorrow! ~Sunshine~

  • 19 years ago

    by Tracy

    aww i like it, im the one you said you like my poem and wanted me to read yours, yeah i can relate to this one, your very good and i think you should keep on writing too!!!!!!
    Tracy

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    A Great Poem! lol

  • 19 years ago

    by juss an allycat

    Awesome gurl!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie coleman

    See noe i like that poem i can relate keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    Thank you so much for coming to see this poem...I really appreciate it...Thanx again:)
    God Bless...

    ~Love Sedusha~

  • 19 years ago

    by Morgan

    hey sedusha. u commented on one of my poems and told me to read this one. its very beautiful. it feels like something that came out of my own heart. great job!

  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    great poem!! keep it up!! thanks for the comment!! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Nikky

    aawww that's SO ADORABLE!!!! and my gosh i can relate to that SO WELL. it's not even funny. NICE!!! you're an incredible poet! gosh i'm so jealous. haha - nikky -

  • 18 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    beautiful poem, i really enjoyed this, take care, and I promise to read more soon.

  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    thats a great poem, i really liked it.
    keep up the good work.
    this poem has made me relise something i should have done ages ago.
    thakyou.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara

    Very nice poem, enjoyed it a lot. Keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very nice, good job!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Shezy

    Thas a Nice one Sedusha *5* on this one, Keep writing and have a great day. Adios and Cheers
    Shezy