Gender War

by in the realm of Chaos   Sep 28, 2004


I'm a girl, and not much more.
I am easy to ignore.
Sex and chores--that's what I'm for.
I'm a girl, and not much more.

Well I am not a thing you wore.
And I'm not using your back door!!!
I can't stand this anymore!!!
I AM WOMAN!!! HEAR ME ROAR!!!

My ended fate, my finished glore.
You, is who I come before.
I'm a girl, and not much more.
Sex and chores--that's what I'm for.

^^ do you think its got too much rhyme?? tell me what u think

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  • 21 years ago

    by Andrea

    i dont think its too much rhyme. good poem!

  • 21 years ago

    by *tanya*

    yay go girl! :D

  • 21 years ago

    by juss an allycat

    GURL POWER!!!! yeah! its to the point and very bold! u tell 'em hunni!

  • 21 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    I loved the rhyming - i think the poem itself could be well elaborated and sort of a lil more in depth - you have picked a great subject something i am really passionate about actually and i think this is a great attempt ...id be happy to help with a resubmittion but this is a great effort! Check out some of my work id appreciate your feedback also!

    Luv Eirisa xoxo

  • 21 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    no, the rhyming's good. i liked it! is it about girl power? hmm.. i liked how you wrote it though. take care:)

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