Scandalious Story of Elaine

by Jacki   Sep 29, 2004


Think of this as a twilight zone episode
or a cheap b movie.

He sat there on the over sized sofa.
Sipping JD on the rocks.
He listened intensely to the story
the young women was telling him.
His thoughts engulfed in scandal,
love, passion, distrust, defeat, and
riveting death.

But his eyes fixated upon the
beautiful beauty.
But never gazing into her eyes.
For they were hidden behind dark
glasses, and a hat shadowed her face.
Her words were soft and romantic,
Hypnotizing as it will seem.
A short summer dress laid perfectly
upon her legs, long, tone, trim, and tan.

She gets up looks out the window
points to old broken down cafe.
Begins telling her mothers story
of when everything fell apart in there lives.

He wanted to comfort the girl,
wrap her up in his arms.
Whisper sweet nothings till dawn fell
silent and morning Melody's sang in
there ears.

Her boyfriend had died leaving her
8 months pregnant.
Leaving her behind like the curse
left behind from her mother.
The story was told how the girls father
had done that to her mother.
Poor Sweet Elaine left to never love
never feel the embrace of a man.
For death will strike him down.

But oh I wanted to kiss her
sweet tender lips, and the feel
the passion and lust between her
scandalise legs.
His thoughts drifted of being entangle
with a women he knew he could never touch.

But then suddenly out of nowhere her story
began to change, a mad scientist was her father,
an anti aging cream to keep her young.

"Hold up wait this story is falling apart Elaine"
the man spoke to her.

But as she continued she told him

"I am the the mother and need fluid to survive,
see this baby inside me i need to feel it kick.
30 years now I've been waiting to give birth
to the doctors baby, and I need your damn spinal fluid!"

He thought she was going insane, but her
glasses she took off.
Her eyes pitch black,
soul less like a monster out of the dark blazing depths of hell.
Her hat she did place on the stand next to the over sized sofa.
Her hair a wig, underneath a wrinkled, slimy skull.

"What the hell is going on here you crazy b(i)tch?"

But as the man got up to get away he was
struck down by a club to the back of his head.

"Pull him upstairs and lets get to work"
said the Doctor to his Assistant.

'Scandalious Story of Elaine' Copyright © Jacki Ford

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    Thank YOu so much, i'm glad everyone likes them :)

  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    Jacki..
    this poem was Excellent...but I don't like or watch "twilight zone"...hehe...sry...but anyways I really liked it...i gave ya a 5...Keep on doing your great work...I read your other one.. I love it:D...
    ~Best of Luck~

    **With Love Sedusha**

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    nice comment miranda........

  • 19 years ago

    by miranda

    nice.....not

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    i have one line that mentions "anti aging cream", thats what the spinal fluid is supose to do keep the doctor and his assisant "Elaine" young. For Elaine she needs to be young to feel the baby kick inside her because she has waited 30 years to give birth.

    Thank you for all your comments ;)