Wow! Oh my gosh, I feel the same way! It's pretty scary actually... but no seriously, this poem was so great! I loved it! One of the best ones I've read it a very long time!!! Keep it up and take care!

~Grace

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Loved it totally!!! Wow this was a spine-tingling poem. The emotions were so perfectly set. I could feel the pain in each word..
The eagerness..
the hope...
for her to realize your love at least someday..

it was all portrayed so well.

The flow of the poem was also nice and the rhymes fit into it so naturally.

A poem worth 5 in everyways... Keep going..
Love, Trincy.

Btw: do you have to write with blood? That scars me!!!

Hey...this poem is really good! I love the way its written, great job!

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Beautiful poem!!!!! Thanks for commenting on my poems also.

Omg, I loved this poem .. it was so gr8 ! keeo up the gr8 work ... it touched me and i LOVED it .. 5 .. !
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Thank you for ur comment it meant a lot ! ! ! check out some more of mine if you get a chance . . ! Thnx Again !

another masterpiece

aww..this poem is so so touching.
u know i was just thinking the other daybout the same thing...that most of my poems r 4 this 1 guy...but the difference is tht i feel like i wasted my time writing them 4 him...coz hes a jerk..he 2 timed me...and lied...and lied...and lied...and now i feel like 1 big fat fool.
but neway i cant really make out from ure poem if this girl u write 4 loves u back or not...though i can make out tht ure a lil sad...neways i wish the best 4 u....and her. :-)

lol sch a purdy poem, it really defines ur love 4 her. hope she knows

thanx 4 ure comment on my poem....i can c we r sailing in the same boat at this point...am i right?

*hey there*
Awwwww..This poem is amazing..Great Work:)..5/5..Inspirational to your Love...Keep in Touch...Take Care...:DChua..

**Love Sedusha**

Hey, this was an excellent poem.. Straight from the heart.. Keep this up and you'll become a famus writter some day.. I'm very impressed... Keep writing.. Take Care
Angel

This is a very good poem!

that was really nice poem really did "felt" what you were feeling. you did put in all your emotions in it you can really "feel" nice job and keep it up.

nice! (:

awwww gr8 poem loved it and kool there is blood in it loll :D
gr8 work
always smile
peaceeeeee