I can feel the beat

by ChildofGod87   Oct 12, 2004


I can feel the beat,
I can feel the beat

I look from the high clouds,
and see that my life just began to shine!
I see that my beauty shines up in the skies!
I walk to the glory of life like I never seen before!

I can feel the beat,
I can feel the beat

Raising up I feel love,
the moment of tenderness
oh how things of make me
to feel the beat of
"Life"

I walk everyday at school like
my life just began to grow,
cuz I have you on my side!

I can see the beauty that
embraces us!
I feel the passionate vibe of
"Life" just appeals to me like
I never known this feeling before!!!

I open my eyes
and the thought of a
new life comes in mind!
People that I see look at me
like they know something more that I never known,
but they don't know that
I look at the "Life"
differently then they do!!!

I can "Feel The Beat"

Well, my own:)!!!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    wow, excellent poem hun! i absolutely loved it! keep it up and take care!

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    it was good but I found myself stumbling over the flow of the work but the message held true good job fo rthat take care and I got more poems posted check it out

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    You seem to improve so much with each poem....I personally like poems that has a descriptions of the clouds in it b'coz clouds seems to go so well with our feelings...Once again a great write and never stop writing...Take care and keep smiling....FIVE>>>