A better place

by monica   Oct 16, 2004


As i lay in bed
thoughts cloud my head
should i be here
or should i be dead
what's the point in living
if all your gonna do is die
life just seems to be
a waste of time
one horrific sigh
i wish i could run
far far away
to a plce non existent
a place with no say
there would be no worries
no troubles or fears
everything would be perfect
no more unnecessary tears
i don't need anymore
no people by my side
i will live life on my own
i'm ready for the ride
so take me here
take me now
take me as i am
i need to let go of all of this hatred
befor everything comes to an end.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ReBecca

    sweetie i feel you. the truth is...one day you really are going to die, right now, it hurts so much, and it's all you want....i can promise, if you only hold on,,,,,life WILL get better, it doesn't seem so now, but trust me, it eventually does...life hurts right now,,the people you loved did you wrong....i can't take that away, but i can tell you i care about your pain. keep your head up.

    by ReBecca

    To all the young children
    on this site.
    My heart hurts for you,
    and I sympathize with your plight.

    You are all so young,
    to have to go through this pain.
    You should have been nurtured and loved.
    Not have to live with abuse and disdain.

    I read your poetry,
    and I cant help my tears.
    To be so young and lost,
    in your tender years.

    Please keep fighting,
    and try to live another day.
    Soon you'll be older
    and your hurt and fears will be at bay.

    I have a 7 year old child
    and I love him best.
    If I could, I'd take you all,
    and hold you to my chest.

    I'd tell you that it'll all be okay.
    I'd console you and wipe away your tears.
    I cry for you all,
    my little dears.

    ReBecca Sanchez

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