Other side of human

by SCARECROW   Oct 17, 2004


Written alongside Awaited awakening, and I only just found it. Also counter-parts for Needless sorrow and Still pleading.
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I look at you, my angel.
You look back at my soul, so mangled.
Midnight sky of life.
Each knife in my skin is alive.
So die, my one love.
You shall be judged by those above.
Run, my demise.
While you fade my tears will dry.
Crimson blood sifts through my fingers
though it's copper taste still lingers
in my mind with my demise,
try run from me, I am inside
your soul, beneath your skin.
What flows in your veins is my sin.
In your eyes, the colour of ice,
I see no anguish, I see lies.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Wow. Very different but excellent job. I love the way it is put together.

    p.s. you have been on my favorites list ever since I read the first 2 you asked me to read. =]

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Rocky

    I really liked this poem. it had a good flow to it. and delicuosly dark. keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Wow!! Great job!!! Your a great writer. Keep it up. If you have any tips for me let me now. I'd appreciate it. And thanks for the comment

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Again... great poem, written in your unique way. I'm running out of words of praise to give you. You're definetely one of my favourite authors on this site.