by cuddelyxbutxviciousXxX Oct 18, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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Shake the bony hands of a dead tree |
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This one is very good moxie, I like it alot. It shows how you like to write. One thing that makes it better is that you didn't specify too much. There were enough specefics about what was going on, but broad enough to cover anyone who read it. Your audience was everyone, because everyone deals with death. |
by ReenIe
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great |
by Dayna Henson
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Hey gurl that was great |
by Nicole Maree
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That was a really unique poem..Keep up the good work.. Luv Nicole =) |