Not completely oblivious

by Lexi Lou   Oct 19, 2004


Each day passes me by
and i know something is missing
over and over i try
to fill the empty space

i see people fighting
i see people kissing
but they look like they
don't get on there own case

they seem happy, and content
with what they are living
each day isn't something they resent
they are full

I'm trying not to ramble and vent
and focus more on giving
but i feel empty and bent
how i wish i was whole

what is it?
whats wrong with this picture?
why do i want to quit
when nothings ever gone wrong

I'm in a bottomless pit
and i cant find a cure
i take hit after hit
and just keep moving along
not knowing whats wrong
but not completely oblivious

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  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    You are a very gifted writer. This is such an insightful piece! Truly amazing! Great job~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    i really like this poem, it is easy to relate to. aww.. you are so nice! you a great friend on this site, too! oh, and you are on my favorites! Thanks for commenting!

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    lexi i like your style lord knows all the answers it is good to ask questions, as a song says if i claim to to a wise man it surely means that i don't know 5.0

  • 19 years ago

    by Felicia Tursi

    i love it! some day though you'll find a way to answer ur own questions

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    a poem evrybody can relate to :) you are a very talented writer. Thank you for commenting on my poem....:)
    Take Care

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