Suicide Note

by Armed-Alcoholic   Oct 20, 2004


Tears rolling down my face,
As I hold up my knife,
I press it against my arm,
Willing to take my life.

I push harder,
The Blade goes deep,
Once I'm dead,
Please do not weep.

Soon you'll find me,
Dead on the floor,
With my suicide note,
Posted on my door.

I don't want a funeral,
For everyone to remember me.
This will only take a second,
Please listen to my final plea.

Just dig a big hole,
And throw me inside.
In there is where,
Forever I will hide.

I don't want you to weep,
I don't want you to cry,
Just do this for me,
And leave me there to lie.

I thought you'd be happy,
Now that I'm dead,
I know you thought I'd be better off,
If I just got shot in the head.

Just put my body in that hole,
And I'll be there to stay,
Just cover me in dirt,
And there, forever I will lay.

I know this poem is not very good...... I'm having trouble thinking and releasing my feelings. This is the best I could do at the moment. sorry....... Please comment and rate my poem

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jessy

    Great sad poem i have a poem like the mother righteing to the kid but its not posted

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    I understand the having trouble with feelings, thing, it might just be writers block or something...anyways, this poem wasn't bad at all though! It was amazing, I especially loved the first and last lines, well put. I can't wait to read more. xxxxx
    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 19 years ago

    by Lily Ashford

    wow that was brill

  • 19 years ago

    by Luvmeluvr

    You say that this poem isn't very good, but you are mistaken. This is beautifully written and expressive. I really liked it. You might like my poetry too, please read and comment as well. :-)

  • 19 years ago

    by jez

    Hey i rated your poem an excellent! Sometimes its hard to get your feelings out onto paper, but dont rush it or try to push it, it will come naturally. When i feel it isnt working i just sit in my room and look at the paper and just write down what has ahppened or whatever and it come out! anywho good luck with future writing and my best wishes from my black heart! love always xox jez

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