Comments : TearS 4 My FatheR (FrOm Another View)

  • 16 years ago

    by bluehun

    as i read this the tears rolled down my face,i could taste the salty tears as if i was crying the tears you once cried.be strong.your a gr8 writer,its been along time since i cried but your poem just seemed to hit home inside.please dont give up,and please keep writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Krete

    Absolutly Beautiful.

    Stardom Beautiful.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lyss is dead

    I cried my eeyes out and I still am. aww I'm so sorry. I really am. It must be hard hunn. stay strong. you are such an AMAZING writer. If you ever want to talk my AIM is lyssxo928 and my email is alyssaangel67@verizon.net
    take care hunni. love ya
    alyssa

  • 15 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    this brought tears to my eyes. i remember my own father who died last year...my father was raised the same way...a very touching poem im sure he wud love it and be proud of you for writing such beauty.
    ~Freak~

  • 15 years ago

    by JL

    amazin poem 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    leave out the numbers and put actual words...
    ~Freak~

  • 15 years ago

    by Lu

    Nikki ...
    That was so sad ..
    The hardest thing in life is to lose someone you love ...
    Very emotional and heartfelt poem
    that really hit my heart ...
    ~ Hugs ~

  • 15 years ago

    by Lindsey

    Beautiful... i didnt cry... but it does take a lot to move me to tears.... i love the line "but these tears i cry today, these tears are for my father"

  • 15 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow hun...tears are also running down my face...
    that is an exceptionally beautiful poem...wow.
    stay strong girl xoxo

  • 14 years ago

    by emmajaynexo

    Made me cry.
    I'm so sorry, it's hard to lose a loved one.
    Touched my heart.
    Much love
    -Emma

  • 14 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I loved this poem. It makes me appreciate my own father so much more. =)
    Great job 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    Good poem I like it

  • 14 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    That was so full of emotion, it was jsut amasing! It was so detailed and sad i almost cried, I hope this isn't a true story, cause that would be horrible! You've got talent though, wow.

    --Steph

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet

    It wuz good really good 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by xXits meXx

    Beautiful....u always make me cry..! 5/5 again

    XoXsweetkissesXoX

  • 9 years ago

    by Raven

    I have to comment because this was amazing! I too lost my father at an early age but my family didn't really care.... Parents divorced. I was all he had left and I had moved away with my mom to another state .... It had been 8 years since I last saw him,on the day he died which was in 2002. lovely poem, enjoyed it very much!!!