New found hell

by Rachel   Oct 30, 2004


It’s the kind of fear that a child feels when a parent is in a hospital... how they are afraid that if they touch them they will hurt them and the last thing they want to do is cause the person they love more pain then they are obviously already in.

It’s the kind of fear that an abusive parent forces upon their kids. Fearing that if they say one wrong thing it will set them off. if they do something wrong they will pay dearly for it and it happens often enough that they do everything they can do to avoid it.

It’s how a kid feels when they wake up in the middle of the night from a nightmare only you cant wake up this time and your parents door is locked you sisters body has followed her shoulder and turned to ice your room is infiltrated with monsters molded from memories and the only place left to go is down into the dark emptiness that is your new found hell.

i know its not a poem but i just wanted some feedback on it so... what do you think?

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