thank you so much.

this poem is brillent it is so true and sad..

this is brilent, beautiful and very sad. It is amazing what just a few incouraging words can do for a person. I loved this nice job

i luv this one too....omg it kinda related to my poem...in some weird strange way..hes not guilty!!

he's always guilty, if he abused you.

Another one i can relate to, it's good.

Kalah
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AHH. I loved it! Good job. Awesome message! So true too. I liked the rhyming! It was awesome. Lots of emotion, great job!
And I live in the midwest part of kansas! And thanks for commenting on my poem!

This touches SO many people...it's true, there are so many parents that don't deserve to be parents...it's not always the parents' fault, but much too often it is...there's a lot of truth in this poem, very well done, again. You have great messages in your poetry!

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Wow... im not that old but it sounds like to me you hit the bullseye with that one. really when you think about it, its all true, i mean with all the broken homes and all .... again, WOW great job!....5

This poem is so true. It has a fairly abstract rhyme scheme but flows very well due to the perfect rhyming. I love the message more than anything though. These adults who do not want children or arent ready to have children and cannot raise them properly need to just not have children at all. People need to quit using and abusing each other. We are slowly but surely creating a world none of us are going to want to live in. And it is all at the fault of these no good screw ball parents. Sorry for ranting but this is a very oppiniated subject for me. Anways, Awsome poem. People really do need to hear this out. Take care. 5/5!