This was a sad poem... that father should go to jail.... This was a well written poem.. keep it up..
Angel

That's so terrible! How could he do that to his own flesh and blood? I believe your prayers will be answered and that the little boy's father will see the light 1 day.. Take great care!

What a poor excuse for a human that father is, nice poem, keep it up.

Wow that was really good I could feel the emotion and action. Nice job!!

Oh my gosh! that is awful! i don't see how some parents can be so cruel to their children.

lance is right, hes not a father hes an animal....hope to see more like thjis!

Omg, that is such an amazing poem andrea...really truly amazing...i loved it...so deep...xxx
-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

beautiful poem, powerful message

hey, wow! amazing poem and beautiful message!! just wonderful!! your soo talented!! awesome job...take care!

Wow, a very powerful message. Great job and keep writing~Holly

Woah that was a brilliant poem Andrea... keep up the awesome work... :)

This poem is awesome... keep up your excellent skills, you have one great talent

wow that was awesome! keep it up girl i love all your work, always have :)

awesome poem.... one of my old friends was in the same situation but luckly got out... keep up the good writting...

-sk8er101-

I agree with you... sad..... I would hate to see my young nephew or any kid suffer... it would kill me to see shyt like that.. and I know what it is to want to do something about it...

CyN