Last Breathe

by Armed-Alcoholic   Nov 3, 2004


My last breathe,
That I will take,
My last smile,
Smile- So fake.

My last poem,
That I will write,
My last words,
Words- Of fright.

My last thoughts,
Thoughts of dying,
My last tears,
Tears- I'm crying.

My last memories,
Memories of pain,
My last moments,
I could not sustain.

My last cut,
The final one,
I can not believe,
What I have done.....

This will not be my last poem... I can not give up writing. If I do, the pain will be unbearable... Sorry this poem is bad..

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jessy

    THIS POEM IS NOT BAD! it is really good realy sad but good you are good at writeing but they are always ssad but i like them because i can relate to themn keep writing:)

  • 19 years ago

    by i love you

    this poem is awesome...its not bad....ur poems are VERY GOOD! keep writing:D <3ayna<3

  • 19 years ago

    by Chloe

    :'(
    I don't want to say I'm sorry, because I know it won't help you. After all, it is just a word being abused too often. But what I can say is that it breaks my heart to see you so unhappy, and I truly wish there was something I could do. I just wish I could say something that would make it all go away; but I can't. Even though I really don't know you, it hurts me to hear that you're going through all of this...

  • 19 years ago

    by ~Tamara~

    This peom was very good... sorry if it is like that for you.... it is for me...all the stuff i right about has something to do with me... you shoul come a read it... but i liked it alot! i gave it a 5

  • 19 years ago

    by LoSt

    was definitely not bad was amazing.... just like the rest of urs ..... great poem

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