I Rmember when...

by Pauly D.   Nov 4, 2004


I remember what we used to be,
And how you used to care.
When you were still the world to me,
Our feelings we used to share.

I remember how you gave me hope,
And made things look so bright.
I remember how you used to know,
When things were just not right.

I remember when we looked up high,
As feelings intertwined.
I remember when you captured me,
My heart, my soul, and mind.

I remember how you'd wait for me,
We'd walk and talk all day.
I remember when you set me free,
In every single way.

I remember when you broke my heart,
Stopped putting up the fight.
I remember when we drifted apart,
Into the long, dark night.

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