I love you

by ♥x__Pwincess danii//   Nov 5, 2004


Love is the thing i adore most
and it is because of you
with out you i don't know
what the hell to do

i want you to know
straight from my heart
no matter how long you gone
our true love will never part

mi head is spinning
round and round
soon ill know I'll
hit the ground

i hope you'll be there to catch me
and we'll be happy
and we'll happily ever after
like a love story

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  • 19 years ago

    by ♥x__Pwincess danii//

    jacki thank yoy so much fore being honest it means alot to me

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    i'm not going to say this was a great poem, because it was fair. You have alot of errors you need to fix. Mostly mi, from my. The stanzas don't flow, its broken. The line soon till soon i'll hit the floor. Should just be soon i'll hit the floor. You don't need that extra soon in there. I hope you your not getting upset i'm really trying to be honest and not tell you its awesome when i don't honestly beilve it is. I always like honesty better. Thats just me. Ok now that i'm done rambling on......i'd give it a 3

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Snow queen~*

    this is a really good poem! great job!

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