How She Looked at You (edited)

by Molly Elizabeth   Nov 7, 2004


Did you not see how she looked at you? Did you not feel
what she felt for you?
You were her world,
she gave you all that she could.

Why didn't you care
when the tears began to fall
constantly?? Why did you leave
when she most needed you to stay?

She cries herself to sleep,
almost every night.
Shes fighting with herself
trying to convince herself
that shes alright.

Why don't you care
when she speaks of her pain.
You just look at her...
your stare makes her feel so lame.
You make her feel so bad,
what did she do? Your punishing a girl... for loving you.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    OMG!! that was so sweet!! You know I love ya!! Thanks so much for that message!! I've been needing something like that to bring a smile to my face! Thanks so much for everything, just your words make me so happy, just thanks soooo much!! If I need you, I know your there!! You take care too and keep writing and e-mailing me too! I did get your number but idk if you've been getting my emails. I think u have but im not sure so let me kno!! love ya to death!!

    LOVE YAS FOREVER!!
    -Molly

  • 19 years ago

    by Bobby Brownlie

    Molly this poem is so sad i started to cry reading this because this poem describes my ex to a T. if you showed that much love for someone and they did not appreciate it then that is wrong because if you showed me that much love and caring i would give it right back to ya girl. you are a sweet girl who i don't want to get hurt anymore. i feel your pain and i have been down the roads you have been on and if you need anything i am here for you. if you need advise i will give it, if you need a hug i will come to you and give it, if you are having trouble falling alseep call me and i will be there to help you fall asleep and make ur dreams come out right,if you need anything i am here for ya sweetie. great poem and keep it up mols!!!
    take care sweetie and remember if you need anything let me know. email me and i'll give you my # so that way you can get a hold of me instantly if you need anything.
    love ya to death
    -bobby-

  • 19 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    aww thanks your soooooo sweet and i hope your right!! lol
    much love
    -Molly

  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Mac

    You know I can Girl! I'm the king of relating to Molly..Anything you write, i've felt, anything you will write, i've felt, This guy who did this to you, isnt worth your love, i know its hard to forget about him, and you might not want to, but you'll realize he's no where near good enough for you, keep on writin them molly, your awesome

  • 19 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    please comment... i wrote another version of this poem in sad poems and no1 read or commented it so i edited it to make it maybe... a little better!! lol, idk but i wrote this poem about the guy i was with who left me and im still hurting bad so maybe some of u can relate to this... idk!! thanks!! much love,
    -Molly