My silent scream

by yolande the dreamer   Nov 8, 2004


"please be mine!"
i silently scream
"be with me
loves what i need"

i need you here
you need me too
you said you'd always
love me through

we need each other
the pains too much
i'm ready for you
your caress, your touch

my cheek is cold
it needs your hand
my lips are cold
your lips on mine

your sweet caress
upon my face
is what i need
to win the race

but i don't know
should i trust you now?
should we start again
now that we know how?

'cause you broke my heart
the first time through
that won't happen again
'cause you love me too

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  • 19 years ago

    by «-Pale-Petals-»

    aw this poem was wonderfully written, you expressed yourself really well, and i love the way its flows, good job!! thanks so much for your comment...
    xoxo Samz~*

  • 19 years ago

    by FireCracker

    LOVED IT .. ! AMAZING JOB .. ! UR WORDS REACH OUT SO MUCH AND TOUCH OTHER PPL .. ! This is a gr8 poem, lol, ur worded and rythm is like perfect . . ! Keep it up and check out more poems but me cuz ur other kind words were truly appreaciated! THANKS AGAIN .. ! BEST OF LUCK WIT UR POTRY .. ! AND TAKE CARE
    =D Maybeth !

  • 19 years ago

    by Alaleighea

    You commented on several of my poems so i thought it just to comment on some of yours, we really do seem to have a lot in common, this poem is great i love th fluidly it flows, the words just seem to move together nicely, and ive been there, still am there i give it a solid 5!

  • 19 years ago

    by yolande the dreamer

    thanxx a lot.........not many people encourage me like you do

  • 19 years ago

    by ŦōüċhÌήğ ỀνĬĽ

    Your young just like me, 13 years old..we still have our whole life ahead of us..you just gotta believe that there is a guy out there that will love you forever..I believe it^_^ Good poem..keep it up gurl! -Shannon-

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