Together

by Kris Lynn   Nov 9, 2004


Marraige is a step, I've always feared to take
I never wanted the pain, of feeling my heart break
But I fell in love the other day
And it's just to strong to turn away
the emotion is so strong, so true, so real
I never knew how perfect and deep it could feel
Your words and looks and gentle touch
I know I could never get too much
Everything feels so right with you
There's nothing better that you could do
And I know we'll never be apart
Because I love you with all my heart

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  • 19 years ago

    by miss scooby

    3.8????? who the hell rated that? man o man i loved this poem i think out of all 3 i have read it's this one i love....it flowed awsome and totally kicked ass :) anyways definately worth a higher rating such as a 5/5...so i think this puts you at 200 ratings...hehehe...congrats
    take care
    scooby

  • 19 years ago

    by Stumbling Shaman

    Hey Christina, beautiful poem. I have no idea how anyone could rate it so low either. I don't think that will last very long though, it was well written. It gave me a warm fuzzy feeling inside while I was reading it. Or maybe that's the flu. Anyway, it diverted my attention from my aching head and body for a little while, and for that I thank you:) Take care yourself, and keep writing.

    Matt

  • 19 years ago

    by !*!Zoe!*!

    OMG...who rated this poem so LOW??? How could someone do that?
    It's a BEAUTIFUL poem! Oh my god!
    I tihnk it's AMAZING!

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