Together forever

by SHYSTY23KO   Nov 9, 2004


Lately I been thinking about
all the things we been through,
from all the long fights in the middle of the night.
To all the hard work to try to make it right
and how you break my heart.
and how it all wasn't fair
but if you look deep inside my heart,
you know that I really do care,
so when you need me,
I promise I will always be there.

I used to lay in my bed,
tears falling down my face,
praying to god,
that our love would never get erased
and that we can work it out,
because with you I can\'t live without.

*Itdon't think it flows so good i noticed but i was just writing what i felt:)*

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  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    makes a lot of sense and shows feeling. gd work :)
    lu -x-x-x-

  • 19 years ago

    by miss scooby

    WOW...i really loved this poem, the best poems are the ones from the heart...AWSOME job

    ciao
    Scooby

  • 19 years ago

    by Allen

    Well Baby_e :) I think that's what poem is about, write down your feeling, let your emotion flow into your words :) this one is nicely done, keep up the good work, take care :)

  • 19 years ago

    by olivia

    hey that was real good i can completely realte to how u feel great job

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