The Painter

by Unseen Exposure   Nov 10, 2004


Brush strokes on a canvas
He paints with his heart
Tenderly displaying colors
Carefully placing each perfect part

With intricate detail
Imagining the picture
First- red, pink, and white
An intimate mixture

Then- black, blue, and grey
Dark colors of hate
Contradicting meanings
Dirty a beautiful slate

Tears from his eyes
As his feelings crumble down
A once friendly smile
Now a miserable frown

Still, colors keep erupting
Letting loose how he feels
Screaming with florescent blue
Creation lost it's appeal

The canvas now messy
He attempts to retreat
But two steps back proves
It's still not quite complete

He thrusts his black brush
Into wet, soggy paint
The image of love
Grows seemingly faint

A once welcoming portrait
Painted with love and passion
Takes a quick turn
In an unexpected fashion

Tears now are streaming
His brush begins thrashing
Painting over beauty
The image goes crashing

Paint on the floor beneath
His trembling toes
It's the story he covers
As the black overthrows

He throws down the canvas
And starts over again
But he cannot control
The hatred within.

It's not good, I know. I was going for something different, but it didn't come out, so it is what it is.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Melissa

    Wow, what an amazing poem. If you dont think that poem is good then id like to read a 'good' poem by you. The emotions in it were so good. I could really relate to it.

  • 19 years ago

    by blarg

    good, different than the rest, but good nonetheless. i got some new stuff. and i'd really apreciate it if you took a look and commented. just ya know tell me your opinion.

  • 19 years ago

    by lizZ

    wot a gr8 poem. ive only jut started writing poems since things started going rong for me i express my self in poems. I'd be gr8ful for any advice

  • 19 years ago

    by Nikki

    i really like it

  • 19 years ago

    by Amilo

    Wow, I love it! It's very radiant, and full of expression. Nice work!