Comments : Break Everything

  • 13 years ago

    by Sofi

    excellent poem
    keep up the good work
    have a look at my poems if you
    have a spare moment x

  • I Miss Reading Your Poetry...Your a Truly Gifted Girl And I'm a Big Fan Of Your Work!! 5/5
    This Poem Just Says So Much...It Makes Me Look At Death In a Whole New Perspective...I Like Poems With Imagery Like This To Help Make Me Feel As If I'm Living In The Moment....This Was Pure Brilliance

  • 13 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    This is so amazing, and full of emotion...I couldn't stop reading and then I realized it ended too soon. I love it and I could relate so much to this powerful piece. Enough said. Keep writing!

  • 13 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    Damn that was a great poem!

  • 13 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    How true this is! I can so relate. Sometimes we hurt most those we love most. Sometimes our good intentions come crashing down in disaster. This poem is wonderfully expressed-the wording, the images, the meaning and mostly the pure emotion. It touches both heart and mind. A great piece,

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 13 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    that was an awesome poem!
    so emotional
    I love it

  • 12 years ago

    by ChaoticSchemer

    Welcome to the club