Stranger Girl

by ~VaMpIrE KiSsEs~   Nov 11, 2004


It was a lonely day
In the depressing month of June
And the stranger girl was standing
Feared that she was doomed

She stood in the long dark alley
Wondering what turn to take
So the stranger girl just stood there
Lost and didn't know what to think.

So she walked to the street
Between the line of day and night
And the stranger girl stood there
Feared in her own fright

The stranger girl was shown
And people started to say "Hello"
And the stranger girl stood there
But now not alone.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Such a beautiful poem, you have such a nice style of writing, i've enjoyed reading all 4 of these poems of yours. Keep it up.

    Write some more, i would love to read em'

    xx- Kalah

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    So she walked to the street
    Between the line of day and night
    And the stranger girl stood there
    Feared in her own fright
    ^^I love that part

    I love the whole poem great job seriously! keep it up i wanna see more poems!

    Love, Taylor

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