What's wrong with us?

by CaL25   Nov 11, 2004


What's wrong with us
Did everything go bust
Our talks don't seem to last
Is it all leaving us too fast
I don't ask
For fear of kicking up a fuss
But should we just let it all go burn
Then we'll learn
I know it ain't a must
To give me a reason when you're leaving
But please listen
That's me pleading
Don't wear a mask
When you know the feeling's all gone
Cause it is you that i trust
And for that
I'll be all rust
For then,
Another shadow of yours will be cast...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    excellent poem!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Awesome poem, thanks for the comment, and keep up the good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    I really ralate with this poem. I love the feel and the pulse in it. Keep going girl.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lipton

    Wow, I feel almost the EXACT same way about someone I know... I seem to be able to relate to a lot of things, lately... anyway, keep writing!

    ~ciao Lipton