Not to be

by Shaneen   Nov 14, 2004


Silently I lie at night in dark and scary thoughts
It hurts to live, it hurts to lie, it hurts to watch my life pass by
Getting older, not a feat in sight
No goals no future not even a might

I would really appreciate anything you have to say and welcome crcriticism

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  • 18 years ago

    by melanie

    That was awesome, and I loved it...You truly did a great job, and there was just soo much meaning there....Great poem..

  • 19 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    That was some deep thought there, though not optimistic. I hope you will not remain in this place where this poem talks about. move on and let your spirit fly girl. Take care.

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