by UM Nov 15, 2004
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
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Barely Eighteen, |
by Brookeღ
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Exellent poem with such emotion! Very well written u have a lot of talent! Take Care! Brooke |
by creasy
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very sad poem..lots of details and overall great!! keep it up!! :) |
by Dark Savior
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good portrayal of everyday life over in iraq..keep up the good work. |
by oOXkonnXOo
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WOW that is an amazing poem! It's so touching! Especially considering one of my good friends is at war right now. This is one of the best poems I've seen in a while! |
by polly
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woah i have shivers, thats a very honest acount of a very brave 'barely eighteen' year old soldier. |