Short And Sad

by LoneWalker   Nov 16, 2004


~this is my first poem so its not that good, but i would like 2 hear comments on it~

I’m always lonely, always depressed,
Sadness within me always,
And there is no one beside me,
No one to comfort me,
Is it just that no one knows of my pain?
Or that no one cares!?

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  • 19 years ago

    by BeeBeeGun

    GREAT JOB its good for a first poem keep it up buddy :p

  • 19 years ago

    by Keanna Hopkins

    Nice work..really well written...goes straight to the point and gets it across so smoothly. I love it...it speaks what i have felt...so well!
    Keanna
    xx

  • 19 years ago

    by emma

    i think this poem is good

  • 19 years ago

    by emma

    hi i think this poem is good and it was nice talkiing to you

  • 19 years ago

    by sadly single

    it is kuel i like it

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