Depression

this is real good i have never really been depressed but it sounds like thats what you go through when you are depressed but i can't say i know for sure but this is really good i hope your not depressed and if you are i really hope you feel better soon take care, best of wishes

~lil slam~

that was really good i liked it great job

Damn... that was short... yet haunting, loved it, sorry I have not much to respond to, you're talented though :)

Go Porti! You have some AWSOME talent and i want to be able to write like u one day!5/5

Luv YA! kt

i like the style of this one. i hate depression...you described it well.