I don't particularly like this poem...but there you go...it came out so i guess i ought to post it.

amazing! your a great writer...love it
you can express yourself well

Well I must see I enjoy this poem:)..Plz come and see mine I'd appeciate it:) Keep on writing:p..

~!~With Love Sedusha~!~
*~*God Bless & Angel Guide*~*

YOU HAVE TOO MUCH TALENT TO ASSOCIATE YOURSELF WITH "MR. PLAIN" (IN OTHERWORDS PAIN). YOU'RE WORDS IN YOUR POETRY ARE BEAUTIFUL, AND FULL OF REAL EMOTIONS THAT MOST PEOPLE ARE HESITANT TO SHARE WITH OTHERS..

thanks for the comment and your suggestion. u are a wonderful writer. i wish i could write more like you

Yo Heather, thanks for the compliment, but if you wrote like me then you'd have to have been where i've been...and you don't want that.

You write just fine in your own way methinks.

Very well written Kevin a pleasure to read

This is very good Kevin..thanks for sharing..I enjoyed it..keep it up!

This was a great poem. I loved it. keep it up and take care, 5/5

Good poem... it didn't seem complete at the end, but that may just be my opinion.
Still good work, also with a beautiful flow.