You're My Life

by Ashley   Nov 26, 2004


My life revolves around you
everything i do
you're what gets me through
my love is really true

you say jump i say how high
you're my one and only guy
look into my eyes
you see no lies
don't ever say goodbye
if you do ill just die

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  • 19 years ago

    by Leah20

    The rhymes weren't very original, however I know that that is the way that I started writing (and still do, at times) You're off to a good start, keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by Liam

    great poem, the last line was really strong. puts across wat u mean well

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    great poem, and right to the point.

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