Mistake

by ChildofGod87   Nov 27, 2004


I had share the warmth with you
I have shared my days wrapping
my arms around you,
but why did you go off on me,
and leave me behind?
I don't deserve this!
I don't deserve feeling hurt,
cuz you made a mistake!
I have my own life to handle..
If you don't like it then leave,
cuz I'm not staying here getting hurt!!!

I feel that your hurting me
by putting 'Stress' on my shoulders!
You want the pain to go to me..
Why? I didn't do anything to hurt you!
The fact of the point was
I was just "Loving You",
but you just put all of your pain on me!?!
Why? I didn't want you to feel hurt!
I Love you, why would I wanna hurt you?

Stop Hurting Me For Your Own Mistakes,
Cuz I Don't Deserve Them!!!

*!* This has happened to me, but it's in the past! It wasn't pretty though..hehe.. Thanks for reading me poem:)..*!*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Kevin

    I think you may just need a little detachment from the emotions that fueled this poem so that you can look at it again....i ain't saying it's bad, far from it.....i just feel that it's far too literal and blunt for such a delicate issue..........

    Maybe thats exactly what you were aiming for.....

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    wow...very nice poem...i liked the way u ended ur poem...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>