by ChildofGod87 Nov 27, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I had share the warmth with you |
by Kevin
I think you may just need a little detachment from the emotions that fueled this poem so that you can look at it again....i ain't saying it's bad, far from it.....i just feel that it's far too literal and blunt for such a delicate issue.......... |
wow...very nice poem...i liked the way u ended ur poem...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>> |