Michael ©

by LostInLife!   Nov 28, 2004


Michael

Whatever i told my mates were lies,
Oh i like him,
He's so sweet,
All i load of lies,
I hate you,
I despise you,
Stand in front of me and die,
I won't shed a tear,
No i wont cry.
Because once again,
My life is over-run with hatred,
For one single person.
So i told myself,
Don't cry,
Don't cry over you again,
Don't let the pain,
Seep into me again,
Like poison,
That has spread through my every vein,
Like a disease,
That is beyond fixing,
Like i cure that will never be found.

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  • 18 years ago

    by **Just Her**

    okay i have to be honest... i didnt really like it, because you started off like you were strong "i wotn cry over you" and "it was all lies" .. then u went into how muchhe hurt you and stuff.. this poem is very mixed up and the beginning sounds immature

    dont take this as me being a complete jerk im giving honest critsism

    keep at writing always, you deffinetly have potential

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    i gave it a five! keep it up!!

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Great poem it's very good!
    Keep it up:)
    xoxo

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