Nobody Know's

by Ashmore   Nov 30, 2004


Why live life when I have nothing to live for?
Why live when I don't believe anything anymore?
Why live when I get verbally and physically abused?
Why should I go on, when I have been broken and used?

Should I be forgiven for my unbearable ways?
I have not forgotten what you said; it's always in my thoughts everyday
Should I be able to laugh and to easily breathe?
I don't think so; because that just isn't me

Why live when simple words easily break me into?
Why live when I can't seem to get over you?
Why live when my friends talk behind my back?
Why should I go on, when I can't tell you the facts?

Should I? Why live? Understand, I have been torn apart
I can't feel anything, just the clenching pain in my heart
Would you be able to live this way? Wanting to let go?
Would you keep on going..having this pain and nobody know?

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  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    i understand you on this poem a lot b/c i used to have these same questions and ya know why i think you should live?
    you should live through the struggles to prove your strength, to find yourself and find your own happiness, to be the best person you can be.
    you should check out my poem "struggles" not b/c i am beggin for attention but b/c maybe it could explain to you what i want to show you.
    loves.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kaitlin Kristina

    This is another good one. It makes people who havent struggled with depression be able to understand more and "walk in" those peoples shoes. Great job.
    With love, K. Kristina

  • 19 years ago

    by Hannah M.

    That was great. I loved the repetition. You did do a very good job of expressing your emotions. Please keep writing, I would love to read more.
    Take Care,
    Hannah

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