Unborn

by FTS Miles   Dec 4, 2004


It’s a sudden burst
Of tender warmth
Which awakens me.
I turn toward you
And find you watching me
Your gaze glowing with
Some secret.

I tickle you...
And tease you...
For any explanation
To your stubborn giggles.

And then my caress
Glides across your belly.
You sigh and cover my hand,
Pressing it tightly to you.

Only then do I fathom
That this added Light
You have this morn
Is our unborn child
Shining in your eyes.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Cristi

    i like your unborn poem but i wrote a poem about unborn also check it out to see if you like it then holla back nice job a total 5 5 5 5

  • 19 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    AWW wow what a lovely poem. I liked how you wrote it, with the giggling and the hinting with the hand on the belly. Beautiful poem. Very touching indeed.

  • 19 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Actually, this is naught but an image, a hopeful vision, but thanks for the well wishes nonetheless. ;)

  • 19 years ago

    by erely

    Very Beautiful Writing...just like painting a picture with words

  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    "Only then do I fathom
    That this added Light
    You have this morn
    Is our unborn child
    Shining in your eyes."

    this is such a beautiful poem. again, your imagery is just lovely, the words you use to describe each motion are beautiful. lovely job

    (i dont know if this is a poem based on a true even but if so congardulations!)

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