by Johnny Marlin 2 Dec 5, 2004
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
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Please Help Me God |
by Kia
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that is a good poem, a lot of what is goin though my mind right now. i've grown up in the church but i dont know what to beleive right now. great poem |
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Wow, absolutely amazing! Great write...Loved it! It flowed flawlessly and the diction was incredibly...keep it up <3 xxxxx |
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hey... don't leave us... *sniff sniff* but if you must go... Then go... But this poem on the other hand can never leave.. It's perfect... I loved every word of it.. Keep it up and Take Care |
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wow! so true- u definatly deserve the five. I like how your poems are blunt lol. But they are good because you pick out some of the problems in our society. |
by Morgan
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i really like ur poem, i stopped believing in god a long time ago, but now i don't really think about it |