it deffinatly makes sense, but hunnie....y do you feel daed? what happened to make you so sad?

dont take this the wrong way but when i read this i smiled...........it made me think of my uncle who died like 3 years ago. i just wanted to say thanks i havent thought of him in a while i really enjoyed it...thanks.... (it was a very good poem)

wow! this is a really great one! I love it! I feel like that all the time . . . only when I feel numb do I feel like I'm free but that's just me lol . . .well keep it up this is really great and I do understand it!

Love, Taylor

beautiful poem. I really like how it had a special meaning, but it didn't exactly say so in the poem. But, I would have never been able to guess that it meant that if you hadn't said so, perhap I'm just slow. <_< Anyway! It is a lovely poem. You're very talented. Good job.

wow that is a very well written dark poem i don't think it hurts to explain a metaphor it all came together

I enjoyed this piece. I'm glad you described its symbolism at the end, that was sort of needed. Very well done.

Really good poem. If you need someone to talk to you can always e-mail me. It saddens me to see you feel this way. Take care.
-Conner

I no how u feel like wat is there to live for...knifes being ur answer....i understand ur pain but dotn let it go to far

*tamara*

Very Excellent poem Andrea!
I really enjoy reading it:D...
...I sometimes feel that way
but keep on being Strong Girl:)...
God Bless you!
Keep on writing and never stop!
Best of Luck!
*Cheers to Happiness*
~!~With Love Sedusha~!~

Allen liked what he read...he did.....lol
Yep, i believe it was great, Good job champ!
I enjoyed it, awesome work, hope you can check your email soon, i kinda flooded you with some... lol, i had wanted to send you daily SO i almost did that, im sure there is a few there, lol, well bye bud
loves,
-Allen

omg, this is a spooky poem, well done. Sorry that this is how you feel

datz a very good poem, something you don't see everydai keep ^

this is another great poem, and i understand it well. keep it up! lol. take care and stay strong. gave it a 5!

Very good poem Andrea, I'm sorry that you feel this way, but I've felt like this too..stay strong and keep up the good work.

Its great. Not the best Rebecca ever read, but it has a message and is a really compelling read unlike some of the dumb ass poems Rebeccas read.
Rebecca did lose attention somewhere in the middle, but it drew her attention again nearer the end.
Becky give it 4.879/5

Excellent... I am glad you explained it at the end. I reread it, and it all came together. Excellent peice. Take care.

wow that was so kewl and a very ncie dark poem, great ideas

aww

an absolutely wonderful poem; i could not write any better. But i am sorry that you feel this way- i did once, so everything can change. check my poems if you like- some are love poems, but i have dark and sad as well. Keep up the good work!

Awsome