My Cave

by rachel   Dec 9, 2004


I'm in a dark cave
with nothing to see
I know there's still something, something to save

I grope the walls
to see if you're there
to see if you want me
but the walls are so bare

I finally see a figure
it resembles my love
but when I reach you
you fly far above

Will I ever find you
again in my heart?
Will you ever let us
begin from the start?

Please give me light
in my lonely cave
so that I might love you
and be your heart's slave

Please rate and comment I would truely appreciate it

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  • 19 years ago

    by rachel

    Very sad, do you think there are any other ways you might find light in your cave?

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    really liked it, gave it a 5. can relate to the feelings. plz chek out sum of my wrk if ya can :)

    stay strong an keep it up, lu -x-x-x-x-

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