I'd give up d wrld4u....but wot wud u giv up4me?

by B4BY BLU3 X   Dec 17, 2004


I thought u were a decent guy
The one I'd love until I die
The kind that would make me fly
I never thought that you would lie

But I got the wrong side of you
You made me sad+made me blue
I thought that I loved you true
But when I thought you'd reply-u never do

Now that you've filled me with hate
I really hope that you feel great
I should've known that we wouldn't date
So now you can go find ur Kate

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  • 19 years ago

    by ..::Angel of your darkness::..

    Hmm the beginning bit was great, I felt really into it, but the last paragraph, it’s sorta seems a bit thrown together, like the last line was only there because you couldn’t find anything else to rhyme with it. Try using a different rhyming word in the last paragraph because it lets it down a bit. But like I said, the beginning bit I thought was really good

  • 19 years ago

    by Thumbelina04

    well done really strong feelings n it gets the message across, well wrote !!! x

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