Thank you

by Jilly   Dec 19, 2004


My heart is broken
My head is empty
No power to get up
I just want to stop crying

You left me here
Now I'm broken

Thank you

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jennie

    This poem is so complex, yet so simply structured. I think...it's lovely. Perhaps one of the best I think. I felt the same way before, it's like he hurts you so much, but later, somehow, and strangely, you thank him in your mind. Tres bien.

  • 19 years ago

    by B4BY BLU3 X

    i lyk da way its so short n straight 2 da point, n da way u rote "thank you" so far away from da othr lines reli made it mean somink. gud stuff