Comments : Frozen Love

  • Hey..this is just amazing..I love how you have written this...flows really well..Its just so beautifully written..Luv it! Continue to write okay..you have talent!! Two thumbs up!!
    Shannon

  • 19 years ago

    by Harry Bryant

    hi Haley, another nice write about a sad topic, but you handle it well, and let the reader know that you may be down, but by the good gosh sake your not out,that you will survive, and love anew, another place another time, another love is all that you need to fasce the world with dignity,grace, strength,hapiness,tranquility, and rest assured you will find it harry

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    You have so much talent. A very beautiful poem that captivates you with the flow. Great job! Enjoyed! lol

  • 19 years ago

    by HJ

    Thank you Harry once more for your kind words and encouragement!!!

    Kind regards
    Hayley

  • 19 years ago

    by Brad Champagne

    Nice job on a rough topic. Although the overall flow worked well for the piece, there were spots that were more choppy. However, I am a stickler for rythm and uniformity in a poem. Again, nicely done.

    - Brad

  • 19 years ago

    by Jay27

    Wow! Superb.

  • 19 years ago

    by Mephastophilis

    Great poem, good diction, could feel the emotion coming through it. xmollyxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Another great poem it showed such true feeling I love reading ur poems. U have alot of talent!

  • 19 years ago

    by Brad Champagne

    I like the way that you express the mood and set the tone. I usually don't directly address anything in my poems because I fancy the English Rennisanse style. Keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Seductive

    nice flow

  • 18 years ago

    by Shelby Bridges

    Stone by stone, I'll rebuild my life...

    I love this line...No doubt in my mind
    you will...you are so talented....

    Shelby

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Very touching...good use of words and discription. you've got talent! yippe! xoxLISSAxox

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great poem i loved it!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    WOW am shocked that such a great poem didn 't get the vote it deserves .it's written beautifully and skilfully. i love ure style .it's special

    keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Seductive

    Hey nice work