Crazy Smile

by Luke   Dec 23, 2004


Once upon a night,
twas such a horrid sight-
A bloody room that absorbed all light,
And made people kill and fight

That room wasn't a room
But inside man it did loom,
twas my immortal soul,
and with sinister intent it did mole-
into my conscience it took its toll
Turned black as coal,
And was born into fearsome lore-
Fore the gore, i need more- more

And what does this all mean? one may ask,
Drain the life to a crimson flask,
Cut away the pain- the Axe swings
Terrible screams and horrid metal stings
Inhale the hate- and in the evil bask,
I can never stop, wearing this crazed mask

Climbing ever and ever higher
Urged onward by this crimson Fire,
Stoked by the lives I've taken
Everyone will die lonely, Forsaken-
And this is my grim duty, KILL
they will bleed till I've had my fill
Armed with courage, righteous I'll mill
them down, sharp, deadly, until...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Oh sad.. it had great emotion in it.. great job 5/5 oh and it was written very well

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen!~*

  • 19 years ago

    by Jo

    I really like your poems

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    wowzers... firstly I loved your heading 'crazy smile' attracted me to this poem straight off. Your words are vibrant, unusual and fit perfectly. Very daunting, yet very well written.
    :) thanks stacks for your comments too.

  • 19 years ago

    by Manda

    wow, that is the best poem i have ever read

  • 19 years ago

    by Danielle

    I like how you left a cliff hanger at the end of the poem...this is the first poem i've seen written with one of those...interesting

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