Comments : Body Lies

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This is a really good poem..very descriptive. My favorite lines were Every spoken word so clear
    Every moment holds a tear
    i really loved that. & the ending was also great. 5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I like the flow of the poem, and parity

  • 17 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    The rhyme was fantastic in this. It was so entertaining yet consise. The contradictions everything. Superb!

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 17 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    I like the last two lines. But I'm a wee bit confused on what it was about. I liked it though!

  • 17 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Very lovely. i especially like the last two lines... ties everything together in a very short yet powerful way.
    -A

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Interesting poem.. the only criticim that I have is its supposed to by lay lies, but I know that you did that for the rhyme scheme..

    preaty intersting.. I liked it

    thanx a lot for your comments they mean a lot to me

  • I really like this. the thyme is brilliant becasue none of it is forced, or appears to be at any rate. I especially love the last stanza.

    Jemma

  • 17 years ago

    by elly

    I actually really like this. ^-^

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I really loved this poem my favorite part was 'Every single day we struggle
    For each step we take, we stumble'
    It flowed so well. I thought it was very good! 5/5