Waiting By The Phone

by WhiSperNcUrsIVe   Dec 25, 2004


I wait alone
crying by the phone
waiting for that call
you said you'd give to me
it's just one of them days
i really need your voice
but i guess you didn't need to
i guess that's your choice
you seem like you care
when you hold me tight
i just wait by that phone
eight o'clock Sunday night
it's our usual time
but i guess you forgot
i just want to hear your voice
because i do love you a lot
i finally hear that phone ring
but on the other end it's not you
i finally just gave up
and said that we were through
but then the phone rang again
it was your mother
you were hurt really bad
the doctors weren't sure you would make it
but i knew that you could
it took a few weeks until you were better
so here it is eight o'clock Sunday night
lying on my bed hugging you tight

but here i am again lying by the phone
and feeling again so alone
just wishing you would call
when the phone doesnt ring my heart falls
but there isn't mush i can do since i dont want to run after you
if you dont call this time we're through
don't promise me something if your words dont stay true
don't promise me something and then not come through
the rain is falling hard and the door bell rings
there you are on your knee with that ring
"i can't live without you either, i love you"
i guess in the long run you will always come through!

*this is just me thinking i am not done i was just thinking and writing tell me what you think and please vote and leave suggestions*

Brandy 2004 ©

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  • 19 years ago

    by Erica Brown©

    Aw, I wait by the phone. But my boyfriend never calls me. Your rhyming seems a little poor. You could use more larger words. And I'm sorry but this annoys me, would you please capitalize your sentences >< I'm sorry but I have a pet peeve about that. I really like your idea it is very orginal. Keep on working on it! And don't stop writing!