by Elizabeth Ann Dec 28, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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by Amilo
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I've never been into religion either.. this little "prayer" is more like the standard poem than any of your other works.. although that's not what makes it better or worse - again, the depth of meaning is excellent, and its shortness was one factor that contributed to that. |
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I think god would have forgiven, lol, I'm not religious eaither, but nice work. |
by Danielle
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Interesting, so short yet so meaningful...loved it |
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I'm sure we all sometimes surprise ourselves *smiles*. |
by FTS Miles
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Simple, effective, and to the point. |