Sept 11th

by Cassie   Dec 29, 2004


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The Day The Plains Crashed In to Our Beloved Buildings Will Be Remembered As The Day They Tried To Take Our Freedom But We Didn't Give In We Stood Our Grounds And Took What Was Ours.The Day Will Be Remembered When The Trouble Men Tried To Take Our Pride In What Was Ours But We Didn't Give In We Stood Our Ground And It Made Us Closer Together A Silent Pray For Our Soldiers In Hope One Day Will Be Reunited As One But The pledge Will Go On AS With Liberty Still Standing Tall We Will Take Pride In What Was Ours No More If They Still Stand We Will Remember How It Use To Be Don't Try And Mess With The U.s Because You Can Not Take Our Pride No More Who You Are Because We Are One Nation Under God .

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  • 19 years ago

    by MariSylvano

    Oh whatever. Yeah it was a tragedy and all that but you people just overdo it. Have you heard of all the south asian casualties this week? what about them? The problem with the US (not all of you, just a handful) is that you think theres no world outside your nation. And everyone hates you, sorry, but its kind of true where I come from. Weve got sooo much bad vibes from you, and the way you handle stuff. Sept 11th was awful, but you people play it like its the worst thing ever to happen, when things just as bad and worse are happening every day.Dont mess with the US is damn right...if you did you'd probably stop trading with us like you did to cuba or bomb us or something ridiculous.
    Anyway, ranting over, onto the poem. Wasnt bad, wasnt amazing. I dont think its good enough to get published, but I could be wrong. Keep writing!