That exact experiance happened to a good friend of mine (except the last part).

Great wording and flow. Excellent job.

hhmm...wow...this is really deep. I'm impressed...i'm just curious, but is this fictional or is it about that one certain person we've been talkin about? anyway, great job! i'm glad you're writing more, i really am. and this poem is really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really good. I cannot stress how good this is...keep it up and DONT STOP WRITING!

sierra i love this poem really really

wow great poem U ARE SO TALENTED this is awsome and yes the best joke is an inside joke lol great work! very creative! >>5/5<<
bec xXx

great...you layed the whole story out....well told.

xxx

holy crap girl... youve got talent.. keep up the awesome poetry writing... great job!
amanda